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My first human CPU pic by Shirogatsu My first human CPU pic :iconshirogatsu:Shirogatsu 5 16
The water swirled all around me.
My breaths were few and my choking was constant.
My head was pulled under the water and my panic grew.
The universe seemed to consist of only water.
This seemed to be the world I was confined to.
The waves lessened long enough for my head to reach the surface.
I coughed and tried to take in a breath.
But before my lungs could be filled, the water took me again.
I kicked furiously until I was above water.
I got one gulp of air and one glimpse of the lifeguard.
He saw me struggling and he only stared with uncaring eyes.
I was pulled under again.
When I awoke I was on shore.
I only had vague memories of swimming there.
And I filled my lungs with air.
How precious air was.
How wonderful.
More gentle than the churning waters of black.
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Hybrid chapter 1
I looked at the snow drifting from the sky. Everything felt wrong. The beautiful snow, the crystalline icicles hanging from the trees. Everything. I sighed and kept on walking. I should probably go home soon. The Four were probably waiting for me.
"Hey!" The voice came from behind me. I jumped and yelled in surprise. Then I turned to see a girl standing behind me. She looked familiar but I didn't know her name. I think she was in one of my classes. Or maybe she sat next to me at lunch sometimes... I smiled politely. She was laughing at my reaction.
"You're Kiery right?" She asked after she had stopped laughing. "I'm Sylvin. Hey, a few of us are going to the ice rink do you want to come?"
"Umm, yeah, but I need to go home now." I glanced away nervously. If the Four realized I had almost given them away then they'd freak out.
"Hey, maybe we could go to your house! We really were only going to the ice rink just out of boredom."
"No!" I think I could have peed my pants at the thought. If t
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A Marriage of Minds
A marriage of minds
A meeting of smarts
I asked for a prompt
Now, where do I start?
Everyone says
Great minds think alike
Either one of us is a fool
Or one cannot strike
These are the words
I read from a list
So hard to rhyme them
Why do I persist?
A marriage of minds
A meeting of smarts
I asked for a prompt
Now, where do I start?
A genius once told me
"You, my friend, are amazing"
Then you had to ask me
"Are you self-appraising?"
Thanks for bursting my bubble
Hey, at least I tried!
Thanks for the fun times
It's been quite a ride
A marriage of minds
A meeting of smarts
I asked for a prompt
Now, where do I start?
Don't give me your algebra
Your scientific equations
I save my brain power
For special occasions
Bring out the confetti
Play a song for the masses
Then we'll sneak up behind
And kick all their asses
A marriage of minds
A meeting of friends
I asked for a prompt
And now I make it end
©Mackenzie "jadefyres-freedom" Wall
December 24, 2008
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A Marriage of Minds 2.0
If our minds got married
Imagine what they could do
An amazing piece of poetry
Some story-writing, too
So many possibilities
If our brains were in a storm
The strenuous feats too hard for one
Two of us can perform!
My ideas and your technique
Or the other way around
Believe me if it weren't for you
This wouldn't get off the ground
My mind sure loves your mind
It'd kiss it if it could
It'd stick with yours forever
Through the bad and through the good
I think my mind just said "I do"
And has the ring at ready
My ideas and your technique
Still together going steady!
©Mackenzie "jadefyres-freedom" Wall
December 24, 2008
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Winter Driving
The water is frozen
The air is so cold
It's as dry as can be
As times are untold
I rev up the engine
Or at least, I can try
It's been overtaken by ice
I think I might cry
My windshield wipers won't move
The driver side door frozen shut
And still it is snowing
This weather's being a butt
Finally it starts
I can be on my way
Until I find the tires slide
On the frozen driveway
So I get the snow chains
Onto the tires
To just get out of here
Is my moment's desire
The roads are all icy
And they're covered with snow
Who's taking care of this?
When will the plow show?
Maybe I should stay home
I don't need to be out today
So as I drive back
I'm thinking, "hooray!"
No more dangerous roads
No more windows to de-ice
I'll go in and have some hot chocolate
Now won't that be nice?
© Mackenzie "jadefyres-freedom" Wall
December 27, 2008
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The Field
So many pretty colours
So many shiny lights
What am I doing here?
How'd I get here tonight?
I'm in the middle of a field
I'm looking at the stars
The sunset is just fading
Leaving clouded scars
You're laying there beside me
You're holding my hand
I think that you're asleep
But this night is just so grand
Then you whisper softly
And I know that you're awake
"I could stay here forever" you say
"For as long as forever takes"
I'm hoping this isn't a dream
Because it's just so real
The way the stars look down
And how they make me feel
The night sky is so amazing
And believe me, so are you
I wonder if I'll fall asleep
And awake in morning dew
You are still holding my hand
And I know everything's alright
So lets you and I just stay here
Together in this field until mornin' light
©Mackenzie "jadefyres-freedom" Wall
December 27, 2008
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You make me feel so real
You make me wonder why
You make me stay awake at night
You make me want to cry
You make me be the best I can be
You make me try hard
You make me think about you
You make me let down my guard
Am I afraid of what might happen
If I let you in?
Am I afraid that you'll break my heart
Or that you'll get under my skin?
I should know I need not worry
You'd never do that to me
But I can't shake this feeling
This feeling of being free
©Mackenzie "jadefyres-freedom" Wall
December 27, 2008
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Sinking to the depths
Unto the very sea
Watching the world fade away
Fade away from me
Darker and darker it goes
The deeper that I get
The air that is escaping
Is getting soaking wet
The lights from above
They slowly fade away
As I move into the night
And away from day
Ever get that sinking feeling?
When there's nothing you can do
But sit around and watch the world
Eat away at you
Well swim toward the surface
And get that precious air
Because deep down in that abyss
They aren't willing to share
Sticking together
In theory it should work
But just in case it doesn't
Beware of what there lurks
I'm not going down there
Just to pull you up
You're on your own my friend
Just say when you've had enough
© Mackenzie "jadefyres-freedom" Wall
April 25, 2008
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Bottomless Pit
There's a hole in the ground
I can't see the bottom
It's deep and I…
I think I want to jump in
Maybe it'll swallow me whole
Or stop me short
and break my legs…
that would hurt, though
It scares me, sometimes
Being so close to the edge
Don't you ever get that feeling…?
You feel too close…
Oh how easy it'd be
Just to jump and  be gone
That's why it's scary
Because you have to be strong
Holding back is the hardest thing
But if you'll be there for me
I think I could hold on…
if only I could hold on
I still stare into the bottomless pit
It grows wider by the hour
I hope I don't lose my grip
I hope I don't fall…
Unless you are there to catch me.
©Mackenzie "jadefyres-freedom" Wall
December 27, 2008
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Your Blue Eyes
If I looked into your blue eyes
And said, "Everything's alright"
Would you just believe me?
Even without a fight?
Or would you just stare back at me
With piercing eyes that know
Eyes that gaze inside of me
Into my very soul
I love that you can do that
That you know me that well
I know that you would catch me
If I ever fell
If I looked into your blue eyes
And said that I love you
Would you just believe me?
Would you say that you do, too?
(c)Mackenzie Wall
December 28, 2008
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United States
Current Residence: none of your bisiness
Favourite genre of music: rock, lullabys (not little kid ones)
Favourite style of art: manga/anime
Favourite cartoon character: too many to state
Personal Quote: "What do I get out of it?"
By the way, I just lost the Game! If you don't know what it is then let me fill you in. It's a game where the whole point is to lose. You can only lose once every half an hour. But when you lose you have to announce it. Everytime you think of the game you lose but you cant lose if you lost less than half an hour ago. Once as you know of the game, you are playing it. And once as you are playing it then you can't quit. Unless you are voted out.

Now that that's out of the way, I finally submitted my story. This one that was on my journal. And I might add part two soon.

I had a bottle of Mountain Dew. I added a cup of sugar and some blue rasberry jolly ranchers ice cream syrup to it. It tastes awesome. And I'm going to have a sugar rush soon. I need the energy though. I stayed up all night watching Invader Zim. I finally finnished all the episodes. Too bad it was canceled. I would totaly watch it if it was on TV now. Everyone who I've talked to who knows about it has liked it. So that says someting.

I live in Michigan now. Yay. It's because my parents had to watch some kid. He's the son of my dad's friend.
  • Listening to: the voice in my head
  • Reading: this
  • Watching: the monster that's under my bed
  • Playing: "The Game"
  • Eating: Saltless pretzels
  • Drinking: I added sugar and koolaid to a mountain dew


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roguerouge17 Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hey, where've you been? I haven't talked to you in forever... In fact it's probably been more than a year since I've even seen you online even... or maybe you have been and I'm not very observant. xD

Anyway, if you ever see this know that I'd very much like to talk to you sometime. :3
Rebehm Featured By Owner May 24, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Hi! :)
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Thanks for the :+devwatch:!
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You're welcome!
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Thanks for the :+fav:!
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Thanks for the recent faves!
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thanks for the watch!
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you're welcome
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